Visual Presentations: Everett Harlan

I think Everett's visual presentation could use more of an underlying concept to push what he is trying to portray further.  Maybe if he started with brainstorming about what the overall message his material is saying it would help him develop that concept.  I would suggest incorporating what text he does use into a more aesthetic form than simply the bullet points on each page.  Also I think that the images he selected should have been more consistent in their style to really get the message across that these are various individuals that make up one group or team.